And then I said “Hm, there’s no Northern California town called Rama, but the Klamath National Forest is real. What real town could I use instead? And while I’m at it, let me outline a few NPCs so that I’m not coming up with them on the fly, and let me extend the scenario just a bit, and…”
So while the result is certainly still Marco Menarini’s fine scenario, I have added around 3,500 words which will make it easier to run.
A tools note: I did most of the writing on my 2018 iPad Pro with a Smart Keyboard Folio, and it was a superb experience. This is the first time I’ve really felt like an iPad could be my travel computer.